Monday, 19 August 2013

Why there no Charlie Duskin in FF.net

So me post here instead. Enjoy the longest post ever. This was a project I had to do in Yr 9, to change the ending of the novel I was studying. It's not as good as the original but nothing is ever as good as the original.

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Charlie

As I slammed the boot of my car, preparing to leave, I look up to see a lone figure walking towards me, slow and small in the distance. The figure stops within metres of Dad’s car, looking hesitant and near scared to come any closer. But I guess she would be. The temptation of a car, my car, leaving would be too much for Rosie.

“Dad, can I have a minute?” Dad pokes his head out the car window, gazing down at Rosie, who stands there looking apologetically at me. For a moment, I wonder if he’d say no, after what she did. But he doesn’t. He knows what regret feels like. It’s a sad painful song and he doesn’t want anyone else singing it too.

“Sure.” He replies, sitting back in his chair. “Make sure to work everything out.” I smile and give him a quick kiss before turning and walking towards Rosie. I vaguely think about how ironic all this was now. Before it was I, standing afar wanting to come closer. Now the roles have reversed.

“Hey.” I say when I reached Rosie. She looks up and manages a smile.

“Hi.” She replies. We stand there for a moment, just relishing the moment and its circumstances, everything that happened. Then Rosie attempts to put on a brave face, and looks directly at me. Serious. “Mum says I can’t go.” Rosie holds eye contact, and I could see the strain. She wants to let me know she isn’t trying to guilt trip me. She isn’t trying to change my mind. I understood. But before I could stop myself, I had said it.

“I’m sorry.” Rosie stares at me for a small moment, then smiles almost bitterly at herself. She knows why I said it. I don’t want her to think this is unfair. I don’t want to leave her feeling like she’s being left behind.

“Don’t be.” She whispers. Then the song breaks into a crescendo and she bursts into tears. It’s a song not of abandonment nor repression, she really does love her home, but of longing. I hug her as she cried, and I can hear and feel just how much she wanted to go. She clings onto me and I can hear the apologies in her sobs. A sad rhythm makes me cry too.

After a while, she regains her composure and steps back, wiping her eyes.

“Is it so bad to wait a few more years?” I ask. “It’s the wait that makes it worth it.” She manages a little laugh and smiles. Already her melody is shifting. Not completely and not by much, but enough for me to know she’ll be ok after a while once I leave.

“I guess so.” She answers, sounding uncertain for a moment. Then she looks at me, eyes bright. “I mean, I waited for you, didn’t I?” She softens and she looks like how she did before all her lies came out. It was a real smile after all. “You were definitely worth the wait. I guess I just didn’t realise I was waiting for us to become friends.” Again, that word. But this time, I can take them and hold them close. I feel I should do something back.

“I can’t take you with me.”I say. “But I can make the wait a little easier. Can you wait a little while longer for me?” She does a little sigh, as if she’s tired. She probably is, and I worry I’m asking for too much. But then she resigns herself and smiles at me.

“Sure.” She says. “I’ll wait.” It’s a nice thing being given someone’s trust. It’s like being given the bow to a violin or cello. You can’t do a thing with it without the bow.

When we part and I get into the car, I turn to Dad.

“Hey, can we stop by the beach for a little bit?”

Rosie

A month later...

I sit in my room staring at the calendar, at the number of crosses from the date that was circled. Nearly thirty crosses. Nearly a month since she left.

Still, nothing.

I wonder what’s taking Charlie so long. I don’t even know what she was going to do to make the wait better. It can’t be that she had forgotten...

Of course not. It’s Charlie Duskin. She wouldn’t forget.

I stare out at the backyard, at the grass bathed in the golden afternoon sun. It’s times like these I hear Charlie sitting out at the porch of her house, plucking notes on her guitar. I never thought  she’d be able to sing as amazingly as she did at the concert. But that’s Charlie, surprising people.

Thinking that I strengthen my resolve to wait for her. It’s Charlie. She surprises and she doesn’t disappoint.

There is a sudden knock on my door and Mum pokes her head through, and an arm holding a lumpy package the size of the palm of her hand.

“It’s for you Rosie.” She says, laying the parcel on the desk. I get up and look it over when she leaves. It has a strange scent, like salt, and makes a soft rustling noise as I turn it over, like sand against paper. I undo the paper carefully without ripping it and gape at what was inside. It was a beautiful conch shell, polished so that the light reflected off the creamy white and black swirls, the inside a gorgeous gleaming pink. Charlie didn’t bother to clean the shell of sand, which littered the inside of the brown paper, the lingering scent of salty water wafting around my senses. 

I’ve bet you’ve been to the ocean. I want to go there, somewhere that leads places.

I smile. Like I thought, she surprises and doesn’t disappoint. She remembered.

There was a note underneath all the sand, I carefully dust it off, thinking to keep the sand in a little bottle.

Dear Rosie,

I’m so sorry I took so long. I didn’t forget you at all. It was difficult to find a good shell. You wanted to see the ocean, but I can’t bring the ocean to you. So I’ll bring you a piece of it. When you come to the city, let’s go and see it together.

Charlie

P.S. I bet you know what to do with the shell next right?

I place the note down carefully and pick up the shell, emptying whatever sand was left inside. I then take the shell and put it to my ear. For a moment, there was nothing.

Then, like Charlie’s song, soft and sweet, a gentle sound started deep within the shell. It came to and fro, with a soft crashing. The sound of waves. As I closed my eyes, the smell of the sea was stronger around the shell, enveloping me. For a moment, I could actually believe I was at the ocean, the soft sand under my feet, and Charlie right next to me.

“Rosie! Lunch!” Mum’s voice snapped me out of my reverie. I put the shell down next to Charlie’s note. 

Let’s go and see it together.

“I’ll hold onto you on that, Charlie.”I whisper, feeling myself smile, and I go down to my family to eat lunch.

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